I walk onto the stage I look into the darkness and just as I look down boom the lights shine in my eyes. I start to dance suddenly I get a burst of embarrassment and I go faster. Then I go around and I’m at the back now I fell even more embarrassed.
Before I go onstage I feel scared ok take a deep breath and then speak. Few I’ve finished I went to fast ok at least it’s over for now. Walking to the hall I fell cold and then walking in front of the audience I feel scared people smell of perfume and b.o.

I like your descriptive writing and it had good language to it.
ReplyDeleteWhat night were you writing about?
what was your favourite part?
Francesca Rm11 HES
I was writing about the first night and my favorite part was dancing on stage.
DeleteThanks for the questions francesca