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Tuesday, 15 November 2016

oppreta moment in time

I walk onto the stage I look into the darkness and just as I look down boom the lights shine in my eyes. I start to dance suddenly I get  a burst of embarrassment and I go faster. Then I go around and I’m at the back now I fell even more embarrassed.

Before I go onstage I feel scared ok take a deep breath and then speak. Few I’ve finished I went to fast ok at least it’s over for now. Walking to the hall I fell cold and then walking in front of the audience I feel scared people smell of perfume and b.o.






2 comments:

  1. I like your descriptive writing and it had good language to it.
    What night were you writing about?
    what was your favourite part?

    Francesca Rm11 HES

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    1. I was writing about the first night and my favorite part was dancing on stage.

      Thanks for the questions francesca

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